Feedback On My First Single Page Website

For the slider, I'd put more bullets for each package, just to make it look like people get a lot more.

Not quite sure why you have a search box.

Web content with an indented first line of each paragraph is really outdated and looks weird to my eye. Increase the space between paras instead and get rid of the indent.

Move "Contact Me" to the top of the sidebar (or lose it, since you have a page for it).

Move the "Secure Payments by PayPal" info box to the bottom of the sidebar or just remove it, since you have it in the footer as well.

Lose the visitor count in the footer - that's so olde-worlde and looks awful on a pro site.

Always put share buttons (and subscribe, if needed) at the top of the sidebar, in the header or somewhere right up top where they're instantly visible.

You need Terms and Privacy pages.

Goal needs rewriting: "My goal is to assist innovators and entrepreneurs to reach their goals by helping them develop their websites to the reach their fullest potential." - "goal" repeated, remove "the". The last bit about potential sounds weird, especially since "their" can refer to the innovators and entrepreneurs or the websites.

Did anyone else note the irony of asking for feedback on a site offering website analysis and feedback? (No offense intended, of course... it just tickled me.)

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